Draft of Contents Page

Here is my most recent draft of my contents page. I have changed the contents of the yellow box slightly; I added the band name to the pictures, I added a picture of one of the pages from the magazine, I added another front cover and I have expanded on the social media links. I still think that I could change a few things about this page, for instance I could move the photo credit and change the dominant image.

11th January 2016

Start of Lesson

In this lesson I will be continuing to redraft my magazine and work on my evaluation.

End of Lesson

In this lesson, I have made progress on my next drafts of my front cover, contents page and double page spread. I have, also, identified what I still need to change about each one.

Feedback Interview for Double Page Spread

From this interview I know what would be best to change and keep the same for my double page spread. I know to keep the fonts, layout and colour scheme. Also, the shapes work really well with the theme but the dominant image needs changing or editing better.

9th January 2017

Start of Lesson

In this lesson we will be peer assessing each others Double Page Spread and we will, also, be working on our evaluations.

End of Lesson

In this lesson I have peer assessed peoples work and have had mine peer assessed also. As well as this, I have examined the evaluation questions and have looked at existing evaluations for inspiration and as an example.

Double Page Spread Feedback

From this I know that the colour scheme and the fonts work well with my theme. I, also, know that I should possibly add an outline to the article title and possibly change the yellow writing as it is slightly hard to read. Overall, I got quite positive feedback from the class but I know what I should do to improve.

4th January 2017

Start of Lesson

In this lesson I will be working on the second drafts of my magazine.

End of Lesson

I have worked on redrafting my magazine.

January

January from Hannah Ould